Fiction by Dinsky

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He pulls into the large strip mall parking lot. They have set up a carnival in the south-west lot, probably a deperate attempt to attract patrons. He carefully parks his 1989 Oldsmobile, Supreme in a half empty row. He opens his door to check the position of the vehicle against the painted white lines, backs out, and perfects the angle of the aged but well cared for car. He leaves the keys in the ignition.

Rodger Maverly has never really left Emporia. Never did he have a reason. Seems, though, that everyone he knows has found their way out. He can smell the stench of funnel cakes and corn dogs. He can hear the wavering tunes playing as children scream with joy. Mike Huckins and his family walk by. "Hey Rodge!". With beads of sweat covering his forhead inside his stagnant automobile, Rodger lifts an arm and cracks a smile. He watches as they venture into the sea of balloons. With out letting his waving arm drop, he raises his right hand and presses the cool barrel deep into his temple

by Dinsky
ABOUT THE AUTHOR
Dinsky joined fictionthis on Thursday 26th of June 2008. This talented author is an active member of the site, has submitted 6 fiction(s) thus far and voted for 136. Show some love and leave your comments and feedback below their fictions.

Chilling. I love this. Makes me want to find out much more about Rodge...
From this entry, I believe, I've an enitre novel to be written ;-) prolly never actually do it...but it's there...and thank you ;-)
I love it! so intriguing. tell me more.
I'm just being honest, I love it until the end. The ending seemed so sudden and rushed. And a little typical.
I think its great and can still be a winner.

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