Fiction by chiii-yaa

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The last time I saw that enticing curve that turns into a smile, which in all ages can make all the things that went wrong that day disappear, he was lying on a bed as I held his hand and the nurses rolled him through doubled doors into a room. I can see from the distant the bright lights that shined on him and I knew the fear he felt that linger chills down my back.It was a cold October morning around 5:41 am, on his way to work a drunk driver had hit him head on. When I received the call my heart shattered as if I could hear the windows of his car scattered everywhere when it was impacted. In twenty minutes I was at the hospital in downtown where the ambulance have taken him. There I was as I peeked through the little rectangle window on the door I saw him laying there helplessly, barely breathing I thought and tears rolled down my cheeks seeing all the wires on him. Walking in as quietly as possible trying not to interrupt anything, I sat down next to him with hands crossed and my elbows laid paralleling to his fragile body I rest my head on the right arm. One blink and I felt the rush of tears running down my face. "Don't leave me, please... don't leave me." He's hardly breathing I thought, this can't be happening. Eleven minutes passed and his monitor started beeping crazy. Nurses rushed into the room as I stood back watching hoping, hoping nothing had gone wrong. A nurse ran out of the room to go fetch a doctor, I heard them saying that a surgical procedure was needed. "A surgical procedure?" I thought, "what for?" He wasn't dead, he was just asleep but now his heart is beating faster and faster. There are two nurses and a doctor in the room with me now, they pushed me out of the way and hurriedly rushed him out. I ran out after them, I caressed his right hand in mines and begged him to wake up, "WAKE UP, WAKE UP, WAKE UP!",  I shouted slobbery while it all felt like my tears were coming from within my heart than my by chiii-yaa
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Chiii-yaa joined fictionthis on Wednesday 3rd of September 2008. This talented author is an active member of the site, has submitted 1 fiction(s) thus far and voted for 4. Show some love and leave your comments and feedback below their fictions.

It only allowed 1,000 words, so I'm going to post the rest of the story on here, hopefully people will find it, I didn't want to post another story as to continuation because I'm sure people will get confused. my eyes at that moment. One of the nurses told me to let go, "you're not allowed in this room mam'm, please let go and step back." Before I manage to let his hand go I stared into his eyes as if they were going to open in the next second to assure me that he was going to be fine, my heart almost froze and tears stopped rushing down my wet face for a split second when I saw that he was urging to twitch his eyelids. Finally he was able to barely lift them, he weakly try to put on that enticing curve that turns into a smile, which in all ages can make all the things that went wrong that day disappear flash across his face, a half smile he did, it was then that I knew everything was going to be fine and he was going to live.
THIS IS THE CONTINUED PART................................................................................................................ my eyes at that moment. One of the nurses told me to let go, "you're not allowed in this room mam'm, please let go and step back." Before I manage to let his hand go I stared into his eyes as if they were going to open in the next second to assure me that he was going to be fine, my heart almost froze and tears stopped rushing down my wet face for a split second when I saw that he was urging to twitch his eyelids. Finally he was able to barely lift them, he weakly try to put on that enticing curve that turns into a smile, which in all ages can make all the things that went wrong that day disappear flash across his face, a half smile he did, it was then that I knew everything was going to be fine and he was going to live.
lovely piece

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