Fiction by Luna

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Sadia was the first one to notice it. They spent a hectic fun filled day at a fair just outside of Cumilla town in Bangladesh. Eshrar was tired from running around the stalls. He was ten years old then and Sadia was six. They were coming home on a rickshaw. The parents sat on the seat. He stood on the pedestal, in-between his father’s knees, leaning back on his chest. Eshrar’s father held onto his shoulders so he did not fall. Sadia sat on mother’s lap. Eshrar was busy rummaging through the cellophane chocolate wrapper. Through one corner of the eyes he could see the rickshawpuller’s bare feet pedalling away in front of him. The sun had set by then. Traces of daylight that linger on for a while even after the sun retires had also disappeared. Yet Eshrar did not wonder how he could still see the rickshawpuller’s feet. by Luna
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Luna joined fictionthis on Wednesday 14th of May 2008. This talented author is an active member of the site, has submitted 2 fiction(s) thus far and voted for 18. Show some love and leave your comments and feedback below their fictions.

Luna I really like this start you have my vote.
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